Tale of the Rake (or Ode to an Asshole)
Monsieur Montreal
was vacuum sealed tight
inside his dadaist
dungarees
he lost his lucidity
once he passed fifty
the effects of gravity
evident
his lust for control
and pretty young prose
created only
impediments
crossing parallel lines
in the name of aesthetics
eyes wide shut but for unconscious
poetics
ah, the vanity of old men
who worship the pen
and grope in the dark for their
muse
is mathematically defined
by Pythagorean minds
as non-linear, impotent and
obtuse
pour poor Monsieur Clifford Duffy
was vacuum sealed tight
inside his dadaist
dungarees
he lost his lucidity
once he passed fifty
the effects of gravity
evident
his lust for control
and pretty young prose
created only
impediments
crossing parallel lines
in the name of aesthetics
eyes wide shut but for unconscious
poetics
ah, the vanity of old men
who worship the pen
and grope in the dark for their
muse
is mathematically defined
by Pythagorean minds
as non-linear, impotent and
obtuse
pour poor Monsieur Clifford Duffy
16 Comments:
Hey, I am past sixty.....!!!But nevertheless I enjoyed this
Hello Dr. Ng! With all due respect, this was not a general complaint. I had a very specific target in mind. Though I really think it is funny, if just a little mean-spirited.
Nonetheless, I am glad you liked it!
Friggin awesome poem. I mean it, friggin awesome. I've got a ways to go before I'm 50 but I love groping in the dark for my muse...
But than again, I've never been very linear...
Those things can certainly create "impediments". Looks like a KO to me!! You do stretch the limitations of one's basic math skills. Great poem!!
Thanks Ozy and Pat. So glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write!
Cherie: thank you for visiting. i look forward to your return and will be a frequent visitor to your site as well...you do know how to wiggle your words!
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I think I might know him myself....hmm?
Linkend over from Plus Ultra - enjoyed it!
joy to you
-.a.-
Oh yes. I'm sure. They abound.
Glad you stopped by. Thanks for your comment.
GREAT WORK!!!!:o)
Jon: Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Did you ever look into the DOT AND THE LINE?
loved this for its structure and acerbic humour
(but being over fifty i am now going to lie down and cry) :)
cheers
Oh Mister Floots please don't feel bad. I LOVE older men. However, when they abuse their authority (just like the younger ones are apt to do much too much), well, then her fangs come out!
Love this! I'm an artsy scientist, so this struck home w/ it's wry humor.
m00n: i'm delighted you like this. yes, i really like these poems and am working on a book of them.
Signorina Rappaccini,
I have never seen science expressed with such feminine aroma. Roll over Sir Isaac and tell Voltaire the news.
Cheers,
Kaz
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