r.pn.zEL v.06
much much is made of Galileo Galilei's brick and feather
but the gravitational effects of extended locks are
somethingdifferentaltogether
tress e s s s s s s l o n g
y a w n i n g commas of thoughtfully_conditioned
f 0 l l i c l e d f0liage
too t h i c k
to run F t I N h G r E o R u S gh
)witchiswhathappenswhenyourrelockedinaroom(
brushed in waves
dis rupt s language
d i s t i l l s breath
press | pause
when just the right length ___ as measured by Pope
in just the right l i g h t
her
c r a c k e d whip commanding attention
promises no safe landings
but the gravitational effects of extended locks are
somethingdifferentaltogether
tress e s s s s s s l o n g
y a w n i n g commas of thoughtfully_conditioned
f 0 l l i c l e d f0liage
too t h i c k
to run F t I N h G r E o R u S gh
)witchiswhathappenswhenyourrelockedinaroom(
brushed in waves
dis rupt s language
d i s t i l l s breath
press | pause
when just the right length ___ as measured by Pope
in just the right l i g h t
her
c r a c k e d whip commanding attention
promises no safe landings
5 Comments:
your very first physics experiment.
schadenflugel!
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thanks for commenting on my blog rapunzel; and not so much for the sake of the comment, but for leadign me to your baby of a blog here.
i absolutly adore what you did with "fingers" and "through" in this particular poem.
i shall keep a watchful eye to see how your work evolves ;)
Thank you for travelling here Katy.
We'll see if what goes up, comes down...
Hey , let me play two.
Cheers
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